MINECMRAFT MODRITTEN BY PHOENIX Minecraft is a fun game but there's a minecraft mod it is cool to and fun theres a class that you can make yure own mod I am going to make a beautiful swomp with pink pads
I cannot read this very well, but I will try to. I like your creative use of color and spacing. You have a good introduction idea. You have three details but you need a conclusion sentence. You need to add some periods and capital letters for each sentence. You misspelled a few words, there's, written, your, swamp. Good job Capitalizing Minecraft on your first sentence. Make sure you always capitalize it even in the middle of a sentence because it is a name of something. Good job capitalizing the word, "I." I can tell you worked hard on this report.
I cannot read this very well, but I will try to. I like your creative use of color and spacing. You have a good introduction idea. You have three details but you need a conclusion sentence. You need to add some periods and capital letters for each sentence. You misspelled a few words, there's, written, your, swamp. Good job Capitalizing Minecraft on your first sentence. Make sure you always capitalize it even in the middle of a sentence because it is a name of something. Good job capitalizing the word, "I." I can tell you worked hard on
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